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		<title>Poetry Practice: Day Eleven</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 13:13:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[My eleventh day of poetry practice, somewhat delayed after first having site issues, and then computer ones to boot. I&#8217;m not giving up, and I do have a back log of poetry to post, however I&#8217;m at work, so figured I&#8217;d write a quick one, and prove I&#8217;m still alive. Disaster of a Dream Soaring [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My eleventh day of poetry practice, somewhat delayed after first having site issues, and then computer ones to boot. I&#8217;m not giving up, and I do have a back log of poetry to post, however I&#8217;m at work, so figured I&#8217;d write a quick one, and prove I&#8217;m still alive.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">Disaster of a Dream</span></strong></p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Soaring high above the world,<br />
Glorious hue of unadultered blue,<br />
Wisps of clouds stretching far beneath,<br />
Breaks of green, and brown, and blue,<br />
I am free, nothing can ever get to me here.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Feeling secure here, I swirled,<br />
Blinded by beauty, I never had a clue,<br />
My flight is at an end, I fall towards heath,<br />
Panic flairs, my joy now seesm untrue,<br />
I am trapped, falling to my death in fear.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Without warning, I am curled,<br />
My workplace, twisted and strange,<br />
An assault of vaunted ceilings, and a scary bar,<br />
Signs of the office I know in the range,<br />
I flee, this new world is out to get me.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">The scene to Birmingham I&#8217;m hurled,<br />
All about me recognised in change,<br />
I bump into a scarey person with a scar,<br />
He grabs me, we fall down a derange,<br />
I hold on, he continues to fall free.</p>
<p style="text-align: right;">©, Jonathan Lawrence 2009</p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Now just a bit about this poem :<span id="more-163"></span></p>
<p>This poem is a half truth, if I&#8217;m honest to the best of my recollection I have never had a dream like that in the first half,  (Soaring high above the world), but I wish I had. The second half on the other hand is all too true, this was a dream I had not long since, it woke me up, and I was seriously freaked out.  I don&#8217;t often remember dreams, just one or two a month. When I woke up, and calmed down, I decided I wanted to remember this nightmare, so I grabbed my trust E71, and furioulsy typed the events of my dream. It wasn&#8217;t easy at 3:30am with no light, but I did it, and as a result, the nightmare has been with me since.</p>
<p>The notes I have are far more detailed than this poem, this poem just scratches the surface, I&#8217;ve got descriptions for everyone, and dialogue, more thoughts, more feelings &#8211; but if I wanted to retell the nightmare exactly, I would probably lose something in translation.</p>
<p>I would have liked another part of this poem, unfortunately the consistent rhyme based on the word &quot;world&quot;, didn&#8217;t go as far as I would have liked. I know poetry doesn&#8217;t have to rhyme, but sometimes a rhyme keeps a focus. I could go back and abandon it, but then it&#8217;s spoilt my initial outpouring. I may post up a second version tonight that&#8217;s edited &#8211; but in this case the edit would be a similar be seperate poem to my mind, and heat.</p>
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		<title>Poetry Practice: Day Ten</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 24 May 2009 09:23:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[My tenth day of writing practice poems to get myself fit for competition. Today we have one about the weather, which bears no relation to the weather experienced this weekend funnily enough. Atmosphere Alight Furous titans battle at the edge, Tempestuous gods push back, Might against might The battle of nature rages. Hurricanes battle warm [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My tenth day of writing practice poems to get myself fit for competition. </p>
<p>Today we have one about the weather, which bears no relation to the weather experienced this weekend funnily enough.<br />
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<b><u>Atmosphere Alight</b></u><br />
Furous titans battle at the edge,<br />
Tempestuous gods push back,<br />
Might against might<br />
The battle of nature rages.</p>
<p>Hurricanes battle warm fronts,<br />
Thunder and lightening attack,<br />
Atmosphere alight,<br />
Man measures its puny gauges.</p>
<p>Rivers swell breaking banks,<br />
Weather defences seem to lack,<br />
Dangerous sight,<br />
The battle for nature through ages.</p>
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		<title>Poetry Practice: Day nine</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2009 16:52:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well today is day nine, I&#8217;m starting to feel good about writing poetry, well I always did, but having been away for nearly a year, I felt anxious about writing. I&#8217;m not a confident person, I&#8217;m honest, hard working, and caring &#8211; all great qualities but I lack confidence. Writing today&#8217;s poem, I felt confident [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well today is day nine, I&#8217;m starting to feel good about writing poetry, well I always did, but having been away for nearly a year, I felt anxious about writing. I&#8217;m not a confident person, I&#8217;m honest, hard working, and caring &#8211; all great qualities but I lack confidence. Writing today&#8217;s poem, I felt confident about writing poetry, and that is a fantastic feeling. </p>
<p>Anyway, here&#8217;s today&#8217;s poem:</p>
<p><b><u>Trumble</b></u></p>
<p>Trumble trumble<br />
The train is speeding along the tracks,<br />
Like the cliche it goes on and on,<br />
It doesn&#8217;t care how many poets pay tribute,<br />
How could it? It&#8217;s a train, it suffers no dispute,<br />
Like the cliche it goes on and on,<br />
Until age, fault, or accident attacks,<br />
Trumble trumble.</p>
<p>Trumble trumble,<br />
It might carry passengers or sacks,<br />
Train doesn&#8217;t care, just goes it&#8217;s way,<br />
For cheap fast long distance it suffers no substitute,<br />
It&#8217;s masters do, they&#8217;re not nearly as astute,<br />
They only care about getting more pay,<br />
Preventing the goofd things train lacks,<br />
Humble grumble.</p>
<p style="text-align: right;">©, Jonathan Lawrence 2009</p>
<p>Well we&#8217;re back to political <s>rants</s>commentary as poetry, throw in a bit of business, but mostly it&#8217;s politically motivated. The train may not care about the state of British railways, but I do &#8211; between Labour and Conservatives, the railways have been turned into a wasteful, inefficient, unenjoyable, expensive and ill-fated form of travel. Why ill fated? Well if enough train companie go under, the rail network would grind to a halt &#8211; either someone wealthy would get wealthier running a shadow of the service, or it simply stops. The rail network, and it&#8217;s subsidies, have been so artificially raised up, no government could take it back &#8211; though they&#8217;d happily pay as much to the wealthy hero to take over.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m grouchy &#8211; I love public transport, or loved is more accurate. Have such fantastic memories, and feelings of trains of old. By old I  mean my relatively recent childhood &#8211; big black and white Intercity&#8217;s with their golden stripe were always a mystery. I never got to go on one before they became GNER, then National Express trains. The design, and routes may not have changed, these cheap rip-offs, the amateur replacements are no match in my mind for the glorious behemoths of memories. </p>
<p>I remember going to the National Railway Museum in York as a child with my grandparents &#8211; if I loved the idea of the Intercities, this was where I was blown away. Amazing contraptions everywhich way, Mallards, and Stephenson&#8217;s Rocket, walk through 30&#8242;s 1st class carriages, and even take a short ride along the tracks, steam billowing from the front, distinctive whistles blaring.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m on a train now, a Pandolino (on mobile so not easy to check spelling), it doesn&#8217;t compare, and though I have somewhere good to go, the journey isn&#8217;t the same.</p>
<p>I should probably have written a second poem, this post deserved it, as did my memories. Maybe another time I&#8217;ll revisit that passion.</p>
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		<title>Poetry Practice: Day Eight</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 16:32:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[So my poetry practice continues, where now into the second week, and still I hope to continue upon this path. I am going to start introducing mandatory elements into my daily practice poems, just to liven it up, and stretch myself technically, and emotively. I will cover these in more details in a post later, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So my poetry practice continues, where now into the second week, and still I hope to continue upon this path. I am going to start introducing mandatory elements into my daily practice poems, just to liven it up, and stretch myself technically, and emotively. I will cover these in more details in a post later, laying out what I intend on doing.</p>
<p>That being said, it is possibly that I won&#8217;t be posting for a few days as I go away, however I will try to avoid this, as I really like keeping to a poem a day, and will be writing them, so it is only a minor hassle to fathom a way to post them.</p>
<p>Anyway, onto today&#8217;s poem &#8211; as I write this, I haven&#8217;t started writing the poem, this is coming straight out of my head and into the pages of this blog. No preparation, or hesitation.</p>
<p><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong><br />
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<p><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>The Gifts of Poets Gone</strong></span></p>
<p>As I lay here, on the backs of giants,<br />
Poetry forebearers that carried the skill into art,<br />
Whose tireless efforts, and many a sacrifice,<br />
Have given me today,<br />
The bed upon which I lay.</p>
<p>By which I mean the literary warrants,<br />
The rules, tempers, and heritages they impart,<br />
For which I am able to add my words, spice,<br />
And never say nay,<br />
The words my mind may.</p>
<p>As I lay here dwelling in fragments,<br />
Of poetry past and present, musing my part,<br />
I have yet to play, indulging my vice,<br />
I suffer no defray,<br />
It will be words day.</p>
<p style="text-align: right;">©, Jonathan Lawrence 2009</p>
<p>I think this poem is relatively clear, and it&#8217;s source easy to identify (see my <a title="blog post on BBC's Poetry Season Favourite Poet vote" href="http://aspiring.org/2009/05/poetry-season-on-the-bbc/" target="_blank">last blog post</a>), it is also something I genuinely believe and hold dear. Though I am a pale imitation of their art, their skill, and their lives, I am no less beholden to them for the gifts they have given that have led me to where I am.</p>
<p>Where I imitate there style, where I borrow from their prose, I hope they would be flattered, and hope they would appreciate my gratitude.</p>
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