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		<title>The Curse of Communications Technologies</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Dec 2011 09:00:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Technology is a pain in the rear end. For us writers especially. In my post on tools I used for the 2011 NaNoWriMo what I used was mostly late 20th and 21st century technology, which while generally fantastic aids to storytelling, do have their traps (the Technology Trap™ as I have decided to title it).

However beyond that writing in a world of technology is a real pain in the rear, too. The worlds you create, and that your characters must interact with have their own traps and pit falls, and equally rewards when things work out.

Here's how I have learnt to pick my way through this prickly problem.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Technology is a pain in the rear end. For us writers especially. In my post on tools I used for the 2011 NaNoWriMo what I used was mostly late 20th and 21st century technology, which while generally fantastic aids to storytelling, do have their traps (the Technology Trap™ as I have decided to title it).</p>
<p>However beyond that writing in a world of technology is a real pain in the rear, too. The worlds you create, and that your characters must interact with have their own traps and pit falls, and equally rewards when things work out.</p>
<p>It’s a problem that writers have increasingly faced when writing about their own time, and/or future times over the past century or so. Jane Austen had it relatively easy, she only had three basic forms of communication to deal with:</p>
<ul>
<li>Face to face</li>
<li>Letters</li>
<li>Grapevine</li>
</ul>
<p>Dumas mixed it up a bit with some technology in the form of the semaphore and news media. It was all a lot simpler though, and constrained. Since then communications technology has come on in leaps and bounds. It is now feasible that people can go days without meaningful real world communication, (I mean face to face verbal and body language and such), but communicate regularly throughout a day through one of the following:</p>
<ul>
<li>Facebook</li>
<li>Twitter</li>
<li>Peer to peer chat services (MSN, AOL, Facebook chat)</li>
<li>Forums</li>
<li>Email</li>
<li>Text message</li>
<li>Phone calls (especially mobile ones)</li>
</ul>
<p>It&#8217;s a nightmare if you want to convey a sense of a modern world in your story. Sure a quick phone call, or a summary of an email is easy enough to handle, but communication is so instant, distant, constant, and intrusive that you&#8217;re probably better off ignoring most modern communication just to keep your story flowing, even though in all likelihood your character would deal with this stuff, (even mildly technical people are sucked into it these days).</p>
<p>I write under the philosophy that this type of communication should be kept to what is necessary for your story anyway, it is surprisingly easy to drift off into subplots that are made up of communication, but do nothing to drive your story. Even if it’s really interesting character developing stuff, your readers might not appreciate it quite the same way.</p>
<p>Something else to bear in mind, when you feel you need to expose your story to modern communications technology, we generally use a different form of our language in written forms of communication. So that character voice you&#8217;ve worked so hard to develop will become confused and diluted with the addition of another voice that is theirs and not quite theirs.</p>
<p>Another hint, (because I’m full of advice today), if you have to fit in a text, email, facebook status or an instant message, avoid acronyms, you&#8217;d be surprised how many readers won&#8217;t know something you think of as very common. It should go without saying that these should appear nowhere else in your novel unless you want a character or narrator to be truly obnoxious.</p>
<p>It doesn&#8217;t stop with modern communication though, how people communicate is pretty tied into the structure of societies. Completely ignore it in a futuristic piece and you risk society being something akin to neanderthals in space, with over half your book being travelling to communicate or your cast of characters being severely isolated from the rest of the universe that should exist.</p>
<p>In my NaNoWriMo novel this year, it was set in space hundreds of years ahead us and to get round the communication problems, I had to have a range of communication methods from infrequent near range video signals,  to mid-range text like transmission system, and a slow moving information network system that could spread across the galaxy.</p>
<p>Even with all that I still had to fit in near range personal communications via a smartphone like device because it makes no sense at all to be restrained to a desk to ask the engine room why they&#8217;re not breaking the laws of physics yet. Because you also need modern like communications to cut down on travelling through your world just for petty but important plot points. As much its nice to describe your world your readers and your characters will get equally bored and tired. There’s a need for balance, but wherever possible I put the extra effort in for real interactions, you learn a lot more about your characters that way, and you can include a lot more subtext in the communication.</p>
<p>So it’s a tough job to get all this organised in a cool and consistent way, without cluttering your story, and without reducing the believablity. Once you do though, you’ll have a lot easier to read story.</p>
<p>I stand by the method of avoiding communications that don&#8217;t involve face to face interaction as much as is feasible. I&#8217;d rather read real human interaction with all it&#8217;s intricate conscious and sub-conscious messages intact. Something increasingly lost in modern communication.</p>
<p>Having said all that, one of my current works in progress relies on Twitter posts as a way to provide narration about the wilder world during a cataclysmic event, but aside from brief cut outs to a Twitter news feed, the interactions with the world are mostly in person, with just the odd text and phone call to provide real time distance communication with a goal. So watch this space to see if I can see if I can get it to work, against my own general advice.</p>
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		<title>NaNoWriMo 2011 – From Week Two to the End</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Nov 2011 05:59:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo 2011 week two, or as I shall hereby refer to the 45th week of 2011, &#8216; The week that won it&#8217;. I&#8217;m sure you can guess why, if you can&#8217;t, or even if you can because I want to show off, as of Sunday 13th November I hit 50,000 words (50,443 to be precise). [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">NaNoWriMo 2011 week two, or as I shall hereby refer to the 45th week of 2011, &#8216; The week that won it&#8217;.<br />
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<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">I&#8217;m sure you can guess why, if you can&#8217;t, or even if you can because I want to show off, as of Sunday 13th November I hit 50,000 words (50,443 to be precise). Can&#8217;t validate until the 25th November, but still after falling short two years running, to hit a second week finish feels great.<br />
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<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">I can tell you, it was quite a buzz to hit the 50,000 mark, and I didn&#8217;t stop there. Week three saw me push on with the aim of hitting 75,000 words, including &#8220;The end.&#8221; Want to know how that went? Well I did that too. Though, it was a bittersweet second victory, someone I loved dearly passed away on the Saturday, and I contemplated on just stopping with 8,846 words still to go. That wasn&#8217;t the memory I wanted to have of someone I love passing, and though it was a slog, I finished at 75,114 on day 21.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">So, the last step of the immediate NaNoWriMo process is to validate your win. And I did.<br />
</span></p>
<p><img src="http://aspiring.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/112811_0559_NaNoWriMo201.png" alt="" /><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;"><br />
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<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">So there you go – I officially win this year&#8217;s NaNoWriMo. I have a badge to prove it.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">However, I have decided that there is more to NaNoWriMo than simply writing 50,000 words though – that&#8217;s goal number one, with a couple of sub-goals that are worth noting. Below I&#8217;ve listed important steps in the writing process as I see them right now, (I reserve the right to grow as a writer and evolve these later*).</span></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;"><span id="more-530"></span><br />
</span></p>
<ol>
<li>
<div><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">Write a 50,000 word novel (or the start of a novel), in the month of December. Achieve that one day moment &#8211; one day I&#8217;ll write a book.<br />
Be inspired &#8211; be creative, imaginative, and push your comfort zone.<br />
</span></div>
<ul>
<li><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia;">Partake in a vibrant community of local and international aspiring and published authors.</span></li>
<li><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">Finish your novel &#8211; if it&#8217;s precisely 50,000 great stuff, of it&#8217;s not use the momentum to get you there whether it&#8217;s by the end of November, or December, our however long it takes.<br />
</span></li>
</ul>
</li>
<li><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">Learn to edit after you&#8217;re finished &#8211; if you edit during you&#8217;ll be lost in no time, even if you make it to the end, you&#8217;re edits may be wasted when you properly edit.<br />
</span></li>
<li><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">Decide where to go from here &#8211; if you think your manuscript is good enough, do you try to submit to publishers, try self-publishing (which is a lot easier with fewer risks these days with e-publishing), do you share it with the world online, privately with friends, or keep it just to yourself. Basically, review, research, decide.<br />
</span></li>
</ol>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">I&#8217;m completed stage 1, and I&#8217;m enjoying 1A, and hopefully will still do so after November is over, and of course I&#8217;ve completed 1b.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">I&#8217;ve found of late how I write and what I write has changed a lot. Not just big changes like the conscious decision to plan this year, but down to the dropping of attempted dialect and accents, little things like marginally improved use of the English language as well. However, I don&#8217;t generally finish stories before I run out of steam, disappear, then come back and write a new idea. This year has seen a change in that, I made it through an extended story to the finish of that story, with the marginally improved English (except for random paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences, and words my phone&#8217;s autocorrect gave up on and so on), better structure through planning and things like that. So, if I&#8217;m to continue the process of evolving it&#8217;s time to look at stage 2 and edit the damn thing.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">Okay, in fairness to myself I&#8217;ve tried editing before. It&#8217;s usually what I do when inevitably I&#8217;ve gotten lost with what I was writing. I basically do it too early normally, and it&#8217;s to change things to get it going again (which it doesn&#8217;t because then I lose all momentum completely). This time though, I&#8217;m going to try and do it right. I&#8217;ll go into details in a subsequent post on here, as to how that right will actually work – at the moment having hit the end of the story I&#8217;m on a break. I need some time to deal with things, and also to read a book called <a href="http://www.amazon.co.uk/How-NOT-Write-Novel-Published/dp/0141038543/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1322456422&amp;sr=8-1"><strong>How NOT to Write a Novel: 200 Mistakes to avoid at All Costs if You Ever Want to Get Published</strong></a> by Howard Mittelmark and Sandra Newman. It&#8217;s a good book, there are things I wouldn&#8217;t do anyway, but there are also things I&#8217;ve decided I don&#8217;t want to think about before or during writing, but as a guide of things to change in my project during editing it is going to be invaluable. Especially if I decide to go down any form of sharing route once I make it through to stage 3 after editing my novel.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">Anyway, editing won&#8217;t happen until around the start of the New Year. Give me a break from the novel, and will allow me to read mistakes, and not read over them while what should be there is still fresh in my mind. Instead, when I&#8217;m feeling like writing again, I&#8217;m going to make my way through a couple of short stories (maybe 25,000 words each, but depends how they go), one of them is a new project I came up with during NaNo, the other is one I&#8217;ve restarted twice already. The old project I&#8217;m really going to work hard on nailing, as I think it&#8217;s a fascinating little piece, and deserves finally getting a finish to it.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">2011 has been a mostly shit year, and continues to be – but I&#8217;ll always have that win, and hopefully I&#8217;ll always have at least a few of the friends I&#8217;ve made on doing NaNoWriMo this time round.<br />
</span></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">But before I go… here&#8217;s a ridiculous complex chart of my various targets and progress through NaNoWriMo this year:<br />
</span></p>
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<p><img src="http://aspiring.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/112811_0559_NaNoWriMo202.png" alt="" /><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;"><br />
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<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">I&#8217;ll do a proper stats post later; I have stats coming out of every pore right now with NaNoWriMo. This one contains all the salient information really in one place. If you know what you&#8217;re looking at this is a handy visual guide to how NaNoWriMo is going for you. A quick explanation:<br />
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<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">The dark green line is the 50k target of NaNoWriMo originally, the bright red line at the top is where it switched to being 75k once I&#8217;d hit the 50k.<br />
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<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">The dark purple bars are my actual word count, while the red line at the bottom are the words per day I actually achieved. The light purple area at the bottom meanwhile is the words per day I originally scheduled for myself, (and rescheduled once I hit 50k).<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">The brown line is what I actually rescheduled for myself at the beginning of NaNo (and reschedules from 50k onwards). I&#8217;m happy to report, for once my over ambitious scheduling was somewhat more comfortable than I&#8217;d expected, especially after I had a sluggish start.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">The turquoise line was my very first schedule, which was over ambitious at the start, I felt, but was designed to push me has high as possible early on, in case I lost momentum later. It wasn&#8217;t reforecast, and so stayed at a 50k end.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">The blue line is the new goal after hitting 50k, which gives you an idea where you need to be doing the 75k each day if you actually spread it out over the month.<br />
</span></p>
<p><span style="color: black; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 10pt;">Last the grey line amounts to a trend, based on performance where I could have ended up had I not stopped and maintained the pace. This changed constantly throughout the month depending on good and bad periods. At the point I stopped, had I not stopped I should have breached 100k easily (indeed since I did 75k in three weeks, the extra week should have gotten 100k, with a couple of days left over).</span></p>
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		<title>NaNoWriMo 2011 &#8211; Week One</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Nov 2011 07:53:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[So this time last year was an unmitigated disaster, and it&#8217;s telling there weren&#8217;t any more weekly posts after week one last year. This year I&#8217;m singing a different tune. I&#8217;ll go into stats and numbers later on in this posts, however right now day six has just finished, and I finished it at 22,056. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So this time last year was an unmitigated disaster, and it&#8217;s telling there weren&#8217;t any more weekly posts after week one last year. This year I&#8217;m singing a different tune.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll go into stats and numbers later on in this posts, however right now day six has just finished, and I finished it at 22,056. I&#8217;m not starting with any other number than that purely because I just want to take a moment to enjoy it. To bask in it.</p>
<p>Why because by Thursday, though I was over performing the 1,667 daily weird count by a few hundred our so each day I didn&#8217;t think I&#8217;d do it. I was behind on my pre-NaNoWriMo schedule that I&#8217;d set. Now I&#8217;m a tough scheduler, when setting them, but I do my best to make them easy to adjust when inevitably underachieve, which I was doing. </p>
<p>So what changed? Friday I went into the #NaNoYorks chatroom and met some lovely fellow participants, and we challenged and encouraged each other. As a result Friday I hit the 10k mark, and that felt great, I was start to build some steam, and have a buffer against a bad day. </p>
<p>Saturday was even better, had a great write-in in Leeds city centre, meeting many of the people I&#8217;d been in chat with the night before, and some familiar faces from previous years. Drank lots of tea, and wore a lot of words. That wasn&#8217;t enough though, so I was back in chat Saturday night, and when I was struggling to motivate myself and get started again I was given a prod or two and made it to 16k, and that felt great too.</p>
<p>Carried on after midnight too with some hardcore NaNoWriMo&#8217;ers  still doing word wars until 3am. Wasn&#8217;t quite as much written in those hours, but it did nicely.</p>
<p>Sunday evening it was a similar tale until midnight, it&#8217;s with their help that achieved my 22k.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a genuine pleasure to be part of a community of writers all working towards the same goals, even if we all do so at faster and/or slower paces than myself. We all enjoy writing, talking about our writing, and other topics when we need a break.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll be spending a lot more time in chat and won&#8217;t be skimping in write-ins, after payday will be going to more than just Leeds ones, I&#8217;d like to goto a Huddersfield one, and one in Scarborough (as post of a weekend writing by the sea).</p>
<p>So anyway, I&#8217;m feeling positive, and am hoping to get to 50k by mid-month so I can enjoy the pleasure of writing with less pressure for the rest of the month. The more I write the more options i&#8217;ll have in editing in January, and hopefully I can carry the form in December and redo the works in progress I mentioned in previous posts.</p>
<p>Anyway, six days in I&#8217;m getting good stats now from my tracking spreadsheet:</p>
<p>Words so far: 22,056<br />
Total hours writing: 26<br />
Avg Words Per Day: 3676<br />
Avg Hours Per Day: 3.12</p>
<p> Avg Words Writing Per Minute:	15.25<br />
Avg Words Per Hour:	915<br />
Max Words Per Minute in a Single Session: 49.3</p>
<p>Avg Morale Per Day:	7 (a qualifiable number based on how I feel each writing period, or out of 10)</p>
<p> Number of Words Remaining:	27,944<br />
Number of Days Remaining:	23<br />
Number of Hours Remaining:	28.00</p>
<p>Those stats may not mean much to most people, but to me they&#8217;re a story that is unfolding as I do this project. For instance the average words per minute has risen by five since Friday which tells me that when I suit down and write I&#8217;ve been more focused and am starting to spend less time looking at a blinking cursor. Which is a very good story if you&#8217;re me.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll stop feeling now and get on with writing. Here&#8217;s hoping for continued successes.</p>
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		<title>Nanowrimo Day One</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:24:45 +0000</pubDate>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Day one&#8230; is done.<br />
I&#8217;m not going to bore you and me with daily NaNoWriMo updates &#8211; I&#8217;ll keep it weekly.  However as the first day is over, I thought I&#8217;d give it a start.<br />
So my thoughts on my NaNoWriMo project so far &#8211; I suck. Okay, it&#8217;s not that bad, I&#8217;m  well past the 1,667 word standard target for day one, however I wanted to blast it. My  personal schedule called for 6,000 words. In the end, when I finished last night I was  at 3,062 words. I should be happy with that, but I&#8217;m not.<br />
See the problem is, I got home from work, (and I&#8217;d been successfully writing on my  phone on the way home), and just went pfft. I got distracted by the interwebs,  television, food, reading the news. So what I need tonight is a digital coccoon to stop  this happening again. Going to need it to, as I&#8217;d really like to make the Herculean effort  to get back on track, (according to my schedule for the early push by the end of today I  need to be pushing 10l to 11k). However, that&#8217;s probably not reasonable, so if I write  6,000 words today, I will allow myself to get back online. Though from this point  onwards I&#8217;ll only be recording the shows I like, I&#8217;ll wait until I hit 50k to watch them, (I  actually prefer watching multiple episodes back to back anyway, you get to to see arcs  developing better than if watching them one by one.<br />
After today the schedule, aside from weekends, becomes a lot less punishing &#8211; that&#8217;s  why a good strong early push is so important.<br />
Okay, aside from my crap ability to focus after a days work, and my inability to resist  the temptation of other forms of entertainment,  the story itself is going pretty good.  I&#8217;ve got a pretty good idea where I&#8217;m going still, we&#8217;ve not gone completely off plan  (though I used more words than I anticipated in the first section &#8211; I can easily see in  editing that the word count in that chapter alone will drop 25-50% but I&#8217;m not too  worried about that now). I&#8217;m now on the second chapter, and I&#8217;m pushing hard at the  world building, because chapter one was too limiting an environment to build up the  world the story takes place. Chapter two is a little cruise, several meet and greets,  and  just a tinge of excitement, as a preview of what is to come as the story progresses to  the thirdhalf way point.<br />
That&#8217;s actually a little bit of an issue, but again I&#8217;m pusing it aside until the editing  process &#8211; I think the plan I have flows pretty well, but it does trouble me that the main  events of the story line don&#8217;t happen till late on &#8211; with feeder events earlier on building  up to it. However, if it doesn&#8217;t work I&#8217;ll worry about it in editing, because it&#8217;s too late to  go back now, and if I go off plan I&#8217;ll probably lose the thread in my head.<br />
This of course makes sense to me, but I offer no guarentees anyone else will  understand a word of this.<br />
So, do I feel confident after just one day? Despite not being where I want to be, the  likelihood is I will finish this year, I do have a plan, I&#8217;ve got a cast of characters, yet still  there&#8217;s plenty of room for my own creativity.<br />
I was going to throw in all sorts of random stats, such as I&#8217;ve spent around 4 hours 37  minutes writing, currently averaging 15 words per minute (including the time I&#8217;m sat  looking at the screen trying to motivate myself to put words down), at my current rate  there&#8217;s 59 hours writing to go, and as things stand now (with only a part day done on  the second day),  should finish on or around the 27th November), however I just could  find a seemless way to fit them into this post, so you&#8217;ll have to wait till I&#8217;ve got a few  days worth of stats.</p>
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		<title>Planning a novel</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 31 Oct 2011 17:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;m no expert on planning a novel, actually I am precisely not an expert. I write by the seat of my pants. Disorganisation is my stock in trade. So why am I writing a post on planning? I quite often organise myself in the work place, so I don&#8217;t completely live life in a disorganised [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m no expert on planning a novel, actually I am precisely not an expert. I write by the seat of my pants. Disorganisation is my stock in trade.</p>
<p>So why am I writing a post on planning? I quite often organise myself in the work place, so I don&#8217;t completely live life in a disorganised mess, I am perfectly capable of organising myself. As a writer I just don&#8217;t, or haven&#8217;t until now. As I mentioned in my previous post for NaNoWriMo this year I&#8217;m all about the planning, so much so I&#8217;m dying to get going now so much is planned out.</p>
<p>Why stop there though. For NaNoWriMo I&#8217;m following the advice of Roz Morris in her book How to Nail Your Novel, which was a birthday present. It&#8217;s a great book and makes a lot of sense, however there are other books, other techniques out there for planning and writing. So for December this year and upto next year&#8217;s  NaNoWriMo I&#8217;m going to experiment with them. See which matches me best, and gets the best results.</p>
<p>Of course that means I&#8217;ll have to dedicate more time to writing, I&#8217;ll need to be firm on making time everyday a priority. Of course it might help that not every month is a writing month, between every project there&#8217;s the planning to do, so it&#8217;s not twelve months of hardcore fingers to keys.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll also experiment with software, and services.</p>
<p>As to ideas for all these short stories and novels, well I&#8217;ve a treasure trove of ideas, false starts, and aborted projects to make my way through.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll review each method, book, and software our tool as I make my way through and post it here, what may not work for me, may help a fellow aspiring writer on their quest for successful story telling.</p>
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		<title>Another year</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Dec 2010 12:51:51 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[As I mentioned before, I failed NaNoWriMo again. I feel a touch bitter, but I just never truly got going. I had a fantastic idea (and one I&#8217;ll keep on the back burner &#8211; till I&#8217;m feeling like writing again), I just never felt the writing bug. So, I do feel kind of ashamed, but [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As I mentioned before, I failed NaNoWriMo again. I feel a touch bitter, but I just never truly got going. I had a fantastic idea (and one I&#8217;ll keep on the back burner &#8211; till I&#8217;m feeling like writing again), I just never felt the writing bug.</p>
<p>So, I do feel kind of ashamed, but that&#8217;s life. The benefit of writing as a hobby is the only person who can be disappointed in me for not finishing, is me.  At least I didn&#8217;t have something important riding on this, such as a contract, or reputation. Though maybe that would help &#8211; maybe part of the problem there isn&#8217;t enough pressure on.</p>
<p>Regardless, there never will be that kind of pressure unless I learn to be a better writer, and to deal with deadlines however lax, or under pressured they are.</p>
<p>In the meantime (between where I am now, and being that fabulous writer I want to be), I&#8217;m going to get back to blogging,  and working on my space pirates serial. I&#8217;m in editing mode with the first few chapters, because there were too many mistakes. At the moment, I&#8217;m rewriting, as I&#8217;m going to move away from an autobiographical story, to a biographical one. It may not sound much of a change, but it changes the whole complexion of the story. I have a new character, some kind of historian, or person with a special interest in the subject at least that can introduce each section, and write areas in a story format. Which removes the problem of being stuck to writing only what the character sees, and or hears about. However, since most of it is still based on the writings of my main character, now supported with writings and accounts of other major characters,  I can still practice with that style. It actually gives me a multitude of styles to chose from, and practice with &#8211; yet it shouldn&#8217;t be as disjointed as it sounds it could. If it were a single novel, it might be a bit tough to read if not handled really well &#8211; as its a serial its still important that it fits together nicely, but people are less likely to be reading it all in one go anyway.</p>
<p>So major re-write under way, not just to add in the new character introducing each bit, but to fix all the mistakes.</p>
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		<title>Aspiring.org Repatriated&#8230;</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Sep 2010 14:11:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well I'm back in foggy Leeds once again. Prague was amazing, took a lot of pictures, saw a lot of sights, ate a lot of food, and drank a lot of beer. Perfect holiday. I also squeezed in two and a half chapters of Memoir of a Space Corsair.

I would thoroughly recommend Prague as a decent retreat, though there are plenty of distractions - the goulash is amazing, and the semi-dark beer is awesome.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well I&#8217;m back in <span style="text-decoration: line-through;">sunny</span>foggy Leeds once again. Prague was amazing, took a lot of pictures, saw a lot of sights, ate a lot of food, and drank a lot of beer. Perfect holiday. I also squeezed in two and a half chapters of Memoir of a Space Corsair.</p>
<p>I would thoroughly recommend Prague as a decent retreat, though there are plenty of distractions &#8211; the goulash is amazing, and the semi-dark beer is awesome.</p>
<p>Now I&#8217;m back, I want to focus a bit on my writing once more. I&#8217;m finally back ahead again with my current serial, having two and a half chapters currently unpublished onsite. However, I won&#8217;t be posting anything for a little while, I want to take down the first four chapters and do a thorough editing on them, cut out some of the extrenuous detail, close a few plot holes, and clarify some of the confusing elements. Unfortunately, though it was always my intent not to, very little editing was done on what I&#8217;ve posted. Just a spelling and grammar check. The idea was to just write &#8211; however having gone through the initial stories to compile a list of characters, character attributes, places, ships, and events (both covered and implied), I found far too many mistakes to just let it lie. So for the next few weeks, I will be concentrating on a thorough editing of the initial, and the unpublished chapters, to try and form a more coherent story.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a good place to do it, the first unpublished chapter establishes Arsène Frassin into a different situation from before, where he has more control of his actions, the second removes most of the metaphysical shackles that bind him, and allow him to flourish as an individual, and not just someone trapped by circumstances (though, as there are no magic wands, some circumstances are still very much present, its the form that allows his freedom of action). This is where the story really begins, we&#8217;ve cleared the back story, and that is an excellent achievement.</p>
<p>There are other things I&#8217;ll be doing the next few weeks too -</p>
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<li>I will be completing my notes on the story, which will help to avoid future plot holes, and blatant mistakes, (the worst of which is forgetting a character completely, and having him turn into a different character).</li>
<li>I&#8217;ll also get some of my notes written up, which is in the form of a writing diary, a kind of behind the scenes look (not that there&#8217;s much to see, but I&#8217;m sure there will be as the story really takes off).</li>
<li>I&#8217;m also going to plan out a few a chapters ahead, and give a rough gudie, for myself, as to where I&#8217;m going with this (read more of this further down)</li>
<li>Lastly, need to do my Autumn playlist in Spotify</li>
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<p>Being a child of modern times, I spend a lot of time online, and one of my favourite sites is <a href="http://www.cad-comic.com/">Ctrl+Alt+Del</a> an online webcomic, which is updated regularly, and aimed at gaming, and gamers (though I&#8217;m not really one, I do play some games so get most of it). Tim that creates the comic, has recently just finished a storyline, where fans could email in their choice for the next action. A bit like the Choose Your Own Adventure books of years ago (one of which I have on my Kindle). Now he&#8217;s finished, he&#8217;s just done <a href="http://www.cad-comic.com/cad//#n2087">this post</a>, in which he has a tree diagram of the choices that were made, and were possible. I&#8217;ve never done anything like this for a story (I&#8217;ve done story boarding and such, but its always a linear thing, and usually never in great detail). I quite fancy giving a similar diagram ago.</p>
<p>I would definately have decision paths, for my purposes though, I would literally fill loads of them with sample short adventures, which gives me the choice each time I write a new chapter to go one way, or the other, or stick to the core story. I think it would be a fantastic tool because it allows me to have both a plan, and an evolving story &#8211; as each sub adventure, in some way or form will add something to the core storyline, while also keeping to my main aim of a exploring as many different space adventures as possible. The great thing about writing in serial form is that if I don&#8217;t want to further the main story line for several issues, that&#8217;s okay, as long as it eventually ties back in.</p>
<p>So, writing wise, that&#8217;s my next few weeks sorted. It&#8217;ll give me a October to then squeeze some quality writing in, before I break off from existing projects and switch over to NaNoWriMo 2010.  Yes, its not far away at all now.</p>
<p>I think science will probably feature in my NaNoWriMo novel this year, purely because next week I&#8217;ll be at the Science Festival in Birmingham, absorbing lots of lovely science to be recycled into my writing.</p>
<p>[nocrosspost]</p>
<p>Then, soon enough it will be Christmas, and the year will draw to a close. It&#8217;s been an amazing year, and we&#8217;re only three quarters through so far. Why am I getting so far ahead? Just so I can mention that next year Aspiring.org will go international again (as in I&#8217;ll be holidaying across at least three different countries next year, go me). This last paragraph is of no relevance, but it makes me happy, so tough.</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Aug 2010 15:50:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>JL Legend</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Good day folks, or as they say where I am now dobry den (or ahoy). I&#8217;m currently on holiday in in the beautiful city of Prague. Only been here a day, but the creative juices are flowing (get your mind out of the gutter I meant the intellectual ones). So far in MSC (Memoirs of [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good day folks, or as they say where I am now dobry den (or ahoy).</p>
<p>I&#8217;m currently on holiday in in the beautiful city of Prague. Only been here a day, but the creative juices are flowing (get your mind out of the gutter I meant the intellectual ones). So far in MSC (Memoirs of a space corsair) we&#8217;ve not done much but there is our first proper space battle coming up, and some actual piracy &#8211; I&#8217;m going to base the world they go to fence.their ill gotten gains on the Czech capital I think. It makes sense, the more we leave where we came from, the more we try to capture the spirit of what we left&#8230; so in the future major colonies will be heavily influenced by their language/ethic groups in architecture and design. The architecture here is beautiful that it needs to be preserved in some fashion by the Czech speaking people 500 years from now.</p>
<p>I think it will be especially true of language/ethnic groups that lost much of their homes on Earth during the wars of 100 years from now. Well its war or catastrophic after affect of going over the green cliff (entirely depends how preachy I&#8217;m feeling when I write it).</p>
<p>Just need to break my current chapter and the show will really get going.</p>
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		<title>Another update &#8211; but good news!</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Jun 2010 03:06:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well the time has finally come, I&#8217;m going to actually show some brand new original writing on my part. The first two chapters of my Memoirs of a Space Corsair are completed, and edited (though I offer no gaurentee to the quality of my self-editing, especially in the small hours of the morning). I&#8217;ve really [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well the time has finally come, I&#8217;m going to actually show some brand new original writing on my part.</p>
<p>The first two chapters of my Memoirs of a Space Corsair are completed, and edited (though I offer no gaurentee to the quality of my self-editing, especially in the small hours of the morning). I&#8217;ve really gone for a bleak start to my characters adventures, and the third chapter will largely be bleak, though of course I can not keep it in such bleak a circumstance, I&#8217;m fairly sure if it continued into a fourth chapter, Arsène Frassin (my main character), would probably but aside his principles and simply off himself. He&#8217;s been through a lot, poor lad.</p>
<p>Hopefully these first two chapters give you a hint of the potential in this boy, trapped by circumstance. It is the foundation for the character, and ultimately the whole series of stories I have planned.</p>
<p>Hopefully, once we move out of these initial chapters, each entry will actually work as its own short story, but feed into the overall plot I intend. However, I must admit, the first three chapters, and possibly into the fourth are sequential, and intended to be read as such. I want to try and keep a word count of between 5,000 and 10,000 per instalment, just because its neater than trying to read 30,000 words in a single posting, and more convenient for the style of writing I want to achieve. As we do move into later chapters, and each adventure is one instalment (albeit with the possibility of an adventure or two being split across two instalments), it should feel a bit more like the pulp fiction of the first half of the twentieth century. I suppose I should come up with a garish and extravagant cover or two to go with milestones in my story.</p>
<p>I am finding this project very exciting, and its been relatively easy to write (albeit in between work, and family), but I can honestly say, the editing has been a lot tougher. I&#8217;m sure if I were to re-read either chapter through right now, I&#8217;d probably find another hour or two of changes to be made. There is little time for that before the first chapter publishes, so I shall let it lie, plenty of time before the scheduler posts up the second chapter though.</p>
<p>I had to have a little think about the impact of posting a story online, just as with poetry, I want to share my creative works, but a part of you does wonder, what would I do if someone misappropriated my ideas? I&#8217;ve of course added &#8220;© Jonathan L. Lawrence, 2010&#8243;, but also a disclaimer at the beginning, spelling out that this is mine, and mine alone. This may be overkill &#8211; however when I ran forum for writers, way back when, the issue of copyright did come up, and I can appreciate the wronged parties point of view.</p>
<p>I want to do a post on copyright, (I did do one previously, but it was more an idea, rather than a real look at the subject), and will probably do this week. I sometimes think copyright isn&#8217;t really reflective of the time, yet at the same time, I want my creative works protected as I share it with the world. There has to be a balance somewhere, and maybe it lies with the creators rather than the law to find that balance. Of course I am, in my small, untalented way, a creator, so I&#8217;m biased.</p>
<p>Anyway, I hope you read and enjoy the first two chapters, and I hope not keep those that do enjoy it waiting with the third and fourth.</p>
<p>Au revoir,</p>
<p>Sage</p>
<p>P.S. Feedback, good or bad, is always welcome &#8211; it makes me feel important that someone felt enough about what I&#8217;ve written that they would say something about it. I am an egotist after all is said and done, otherwise I wouldn&#8217;t be here. Plus, it might just help shape me into a real writer, then if I was ever published, I&#8217;d have to acknowledge your contribution &#8211; (bribery gets you everywhere, or it does in Arsène&#8217;s corrupt world).</p>
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		<title>Aha! Found You!</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 15 May 2010 09:54:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[My muses have elected to return to me it seems. I suddenly have the ability to write again, and am doing so with gusto working on a new project. I know, I have lots of unfinished projects I should be working on, but I'm just enjoying writing right now. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My muses have elected to return to me it seems. I suddenly have the ability to write again, and am doing so with gusto working on a new project. I know, I have lots of unfinished projects I should be working on, but I&#8217;m just enjoying writing right now.</p>
<p>So the new project, it’s currently titled Journals of a Space Corsair, and is a sci-fi piece. Inspired by the concept of the Bio of a Space Tyrant novels by Piers Anthony, which I read recently, and once I finished reading those books, I also read Michael Crichton&#8217;s Pirate Latitudes, between the two of them, this whole science fiction universe of mine was inspired and created in my mind. What’s more is I&#8217;ve been able to put it into words, something I’ve struggled to do for the past eighteen months.</p>
<p>It’s a nice feeling, not too many words just yet, but just passed the 20,000 mark in two weeks so that’s a comfort.</p>
<p>The way I&#8217;m doing this project is blog posts, it’s an auto-biography, so I&#8217;m going to write it as a series of confessionals, the man&#8217;s story in his own words, detailing his good deeds, but mostly his crimes, the lifestyle he led, and the suffering he brought and received. The hardest part is not giving in to my tendency to make the character a flawed good guy, or to have the character swing from bad to good. I&#8217;m trying to write something that reflects a man, and not an archetype from a TV series. That isn&#8217;t to say there isn&#8217;t an arc, in fact there&#8217;s a pretty big one, and my aim is the character goes from illegality to legitimacy, and then back to illegality. Times are turbulent, wars rise up and allegiances change.</p>
<p>I do feel the need to acknowledge Piers Anthony, and Michael Crichton, as their books are a massive influence on this story, it was their books that really lit my imagination on fire.</p>
<p>From Michael Crichton I tried to take a sense of how pirates actually operated, and in many ways how the new world worked, the trade routes between the colonial lands, the stopping off points like Jamaica, which I&#8217;ve tried to translate the spirit of into worlds and space stations.</p>
<p>From Piers Anthony, obviously I&#8217;ve tried to take the format, the fictional autobiography of a significant figure in future history, I&#8217;m also borrowing some of the technology he mentions in his books, the travelling via a beam of light, over massive distances, which is as reasonable a way to explain interstellar travel as any. Of course it is fraught with its own difficulties in a story that takes place in real time, with politics, wars, and tactics &#8211; I can&#8217;t really afford it taking decades to travel from one planet to the other. Instead, I shall embellish the idea with faster than light energy &#8211; so it takes days and weeks to travel between the stars.</p>
<p>I think it is important to acknowledge where a story comes from &#8211; it is not my intention to plagiarise these amazing authors, but they have inspired within me a tale which I think is unique and distinct in its own right. Besides when it comes to science fiction, it’s never easy to come up with easy ideas for propulsion, and story telling in general tends to form into archetypes. I think that’s one of the advantages of writing an account of a self confessed bad guy, while not ground breaking or unique, it is a point of view that is carried far less often than that of a hero, heroically battling to save the world.</p>
<p>My intention is to post up a chapter (and if I write it right, it will be more of a self contained short story, which feeds into the overall tale), every fortnight, detailing a significant memory of this space corsair. I won&#8217;t be launching it right away, as I want to build up four or five chapters ahead, this gives me a nice cushion with which to edit the stories (because while the muse does flow, it tends not to check the grammar for me, nor does it worry about the annoying inconsistencies of writing large pieces of work in small bits). Also, my sister&#8217;s baby is due next month, I&#8217;m on holiday in Prague in August, and I&#8217;m off to the British Science Festival in Birmingham this September, so there’s plenty to interrupt my schedule.</p>
<p>Speaking of the British Science Festival, I’m really looking forward to it, it feeds a lot of knowledge in my science fiction, such as the power system for the ships in my story – I learned that from a presentation I went to on fusion energy, I always favoured the methodology employed in the tokamak fusion generators, rather than the method involving lasers, purely because it seems to me that once such devices as ITER are operational and producing massive quantities of energy, we would be able to learn from this and scale the process down to have a device that can sit aboard a starship and produce the kind of energy I need for propulsion, FTL (faster than light) travel, and of course the staple of most space based science fiction, the weapons.</p>
<p>I am genuinely excited to be writing again, and long may it continue. Nanowrimo is in November (it’s always in November, hardly a surprise there), and this year I&#8217;m going to ace it. Mark my words.</p>
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